Mostly written for my own amusement creative writing unit this semester, this is a first person version of this charming little piece. I, uh, changed some of the dialogue somewhat, if only to avoid repetition, though I kept the ending because, well, I liked it better and didn't think I could perfect it further.
Not sure if I'll keep this or not. Might just revise the third person version to reflect this one. I like the flow of dialogue better. It sounds more natural. Or something. XD
( Scary city is scary. D: )
Not sure if I'll keep this or not. Might just revise the third person version to reflect this one. I like the flow of dialogue better. It sounds more natural. Or something. XD
( Scary city is scary. D: )