I'm so excited to read a fic written in first-person that doesn't make me want to scream and go drown myself in a fishtank! Not only that, it's also too adorable for words - watch me flailing for description, yo - and I *love* it. Hurrah Admish!
I'm always a fan of writers who can convey a mood without the need for excessive description, as you've managed to do here. (My own attempts tend to fail; short fic that I write usually ends up totally pointless and boring, so I say this with meaning!) Gorgeous :)
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I'm so excited to read a fic written in first-person that doesn't make me want to scream and go drown myself in a fishtank! Not only that, it's also too adorable for words - watch me flailing for description, yo - and I *love* it. Hurrah Admish!
I'm always a fan of writers who can convey a mood without the need for excessive description, as you've managed to do here. (My own attempts tend to fail; short fic that I write usually ends up totally pointless and boring, so I say this with meaning!) Gorgeous :)